MistyE's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Fedora Fun]

Probably fine as an inside joke, though it's lacking as a standalone flash. The biggest area of improvement is definitely the art, your animation is smooth and fluid. Keep it up!

[Robot Boy Show - 1/02/15]

another delicious video by "robot-jones"

robot-jones responds:

mmmmmmm fresh from the oven

[Paul]

Great job on this

Johnopotamus responds:

Thank you!!!!

[SqS6 Ep # 2: Talk Prompts]

There's a noticeable improvement in the animation; there's quite a bit of frame-by-frame animation in here and there isn't a single moment where the characters seemed stiff, which is definitely a good thing. There were also some interesting things you decided to show for the visuals, like at 2:05, and that definitely made things look nicer and flow better. So there was an improvement in the animation from PupilPath.

With regards to the writing, PupilPath is a bit more well-rounded and solid, if only for the several genuinely funny and interesting moments in there. This episode has a few funny parts too, but the writing otherwise seems to be redundant and a standstill.

However, I wouldn't worry about the humor since I recognize humor's not the only important part of the writing. The things these episodes about are pretty mundane, and I realize this IS a series about school, so I'd be okay with the mundane and everyday subject matter if the dialogue was better.

The dialogue from the students seemed ok. However, the teacher's dialogue definitely needs some work. All he really seems to do is spit out lame stock phrases, all he really does is call people names and say "Really? Are you serious?" throughout the episode and I get he's supposed to be a mean character, his dialogue is just very redundant, and it needs a certain wit to it, I also noticed that there seem to be a lot of asides and pointless side-conversations in these episodes that could be trimmed since they don't really do anything. In the beginning, they DID help develop the character but they just seem kind of redundant now and they get in the way of the plotline.

So in conclusion, the animation is definitely improving, though I'd like to see more inventive dialogue if you know what I mean, I could elaborate if you need. Keep up the good work!

[Pico Old]

I love this so much

[depressing stories]

ths is the best

dylan responds:

"everywhere I'm looking now"

- beyoncé, 2008

[OTB - Ship of 1000 Deaths]

great work

RadioTubeClock responds:

Thanks!