MistyE's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Some Fall]

Nicely made. The art was simple, but I liked the amount of frame-by-frame animation in this, especially the walk cycle and the swimming. The animation in the beginning was very well done.

The Audio Portal music fit the animation very well. This was fun to watch, but the ending was very abrupt - I didn't expect it. I would suggest having the music fade out before it ends or at least saying "The End."

sleeeeep responds:

Thanks. I was on a dead line and in a rush. But yeah pretty abrupt ending.

[Transformice Falcon Punch]

The art was a bit unpolished, but it was good overall. The main problem I have with the animation is the inconsistency in the line quality, it's a bit uncanny to watch but the overall idea was funny and you're a good animator, the only issue with your animation is the inconsistent line quality.

[Rabbit Hole (loop)]

The animation in this loop was very well-done. I particularly enjoyed the amount of frame-by-frame animation in this. I also liked your color choice and your character design, they're perfect.

[Mister Sweet #3]

The animation here is decent. I like the pixel art drawn in MS Paint, though for future reference, it'd be much easier if you just downloaded the PIxel Tool extension for Flash for any pixelated animation. The concept is simple but executed well, the animation just could've been better, especially when he's falling, a lot of the tweening you used for this part looks awkward.

[LEGO Mario Adventure!]

An improvement from your Lego Land series.

A lot of the stop-motion movements were very smooth and well-done. I liked the choice of music and the overall idea.

artistunknown responds:

Thanks for the feedback, it's encouraging, and makes me actually want to get back into making stopmotions.

[Planetoid - Original]

You have definitely improved with Chapter 4 since this flash.

This seems like more of an animatic than a finished product, though it still looks great and promising. It's clear you have a talent at storyboarding. It's rare that I see flash cartoons that have "camera work" as good as it is here.

A lot of the animation looked like it wasn't final. Try to avoid using thick outlines for things and try to avoid using bitmaps. They tend not to look good.